Flash Fiction Friday… Revenge



They met for dinner at the usual place. Afterwards, they headed for her apartment. He was so predicable… wanting to eat her pussy before they fucked. She grabbed the camera and lined up the shot as he tongued her.

“Don’t EVER piss me off, because I Will find the perfect angle for revenge!” she thought as the camera clicked. “Did he think I wouldn’t find out? Asshole cheats on me with some office slut! He is getting Exactly what he deserves.”

She would post the pics to his Facebook page. Stupid idiot. Now all she had to do was fake an orgasm and she could finish her revenge.



This week was way too short and had way too much going on. Way too many petty politics and stupid people tricks. So, that is probably why I saw only one scenario this week. Our challenge for this Flash Fiction Friday was 80-110 words and the phrase “the perfect angle”.

18 thoughts on “Flash Fiction Friday… Revenge

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  1. Our lives often affect our fiction, and it’s a great way to get our frustrations out, isn’t it? For what it’s worth, it makes for a great story, and yes, he’s got it comin to him!

    1. Glad you liked the story. Yes, our lives often do affect our fiction. However, with this piece, it was simply the pic talking. I’m poly and don’t do jealousy. Wolf and I have been together for nearly eight years and have never ‘cheated’ on each other because it isn’t how our relationship works. We’ve both had other relationships, but prefer each others company. 🙂

  2. “Now all she had to do was fake an orgasm and she could finish her revenge.” I think that line says it all; the most powerful one in the piece. It’s bitter and calculating. Not that she doesn’t deserve to be, just that it oozes negativity. I won’t say “very nice” because it’s very nasty, but it works perfectly.

    1. Exactly. It was nasty, calculating and very well planned. A dear friend of mine had a lover that complained that he engineered sex. It was boring and lacked any kind of thrill for her. About a week later, they had sex. Obviously mind blowing as you could hear her screaming her orgasms outside. When he finished with her, he got up, and walked out. On her door, he nailed the plan of exactly how he carried out sex. (ala three fingers stimulation, apply to gspot, turn her on her side, add clit stim) The last item was don’t penetrate, don’t orgasm. He didn’t. And yes, he dumped her.

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